As a writer and a book reviewer, I’ve made some observations and learned a few lessons over the past few years about the state of mind of many emerging authors. If you care to listen, I’ll share a few. Take them for what they are, the opinions of an unpublished author.
First, I think many new authors fail to take an honest account of their motivations before jumping into writing. Motivations are legion, but every writer wants their work published. It may not be the only motivation, but it’s likely the most important. I call this powerful motivation the Writer’s Drive. However, when a writer doesn’t have other goals besides publication, such as improving the quality of their work, the Writer’s Drive can become overpowering. A relentless, obsessive, and often frustrating quest for publication can cloud judgment and seriously interfere with their craft. To put it another way, too much Writer’s Drive is a bad thing.
Writer’s Drive often leads to Writer’s Desperation, the overpowering desire for feedback and validation. Desperation leads to anxiety and impatience. It often comprises a writer’s work as they rush it to publication before its ready. Alas, desperation often leads to fear.
Writers often fear criticism because writing is an intensely personal experience.
To some degree or another, writers must lower their shields and open themselves up to the judgment of strangers, resulting in varying degrees of apprehension, or what I call Writer’s Fear. Like any other human endeavor, most people who try their hand at writing fail. After the sixth grade most ballerinas and baseball players give up and become other things. Sadly, it takes more time for writers to get a clue. Unlike sports, writers can insulate themselves from scrutiny and, to avoid hurt feelings, friends and relatives sometimes aren’t entirely honest. When writers finally hit a wall of honest, often brutal, feedback, they have three choices: quit, learn and adapt, or lie to themselves. Which brings me to my last observation: writers can be self-delusional.
There isn’t a writer out there who hasn’t suffered Writer’s Delusion. We’ve often ignored a golden nugget of advice that a manuscript might need major work. People naturally hear what they want to hear, not what they need to hear. It reminds me of the movie Dumb and Dumber
when the Lauren Holly tells Jim Carey he only has a
one-in-a-million chance of ever going out with her. He smiles and says, “So you’re telling me I have a chance!” Yep, that’s us writers.
There you have it - A strong, unchecked drive to publish often leads to desperation, fear, and self-delusion. In other words, it leads to a very frustrated writer. So I come back to the point about motivations. As a writer, if you’re honest about your motivations you can often find other reasons than publication. Getting published is a natural, long-term goal, but there is more to writing than seeing your book in print. Improving your craft, for example, is an important and attainable near-term goal.
Bottom line, you need something to keep you motivated on the long road to publication that doesn’t stress you out, keeps you writing and moving forward. Find reasons that are uplifting, relaxing, and positive. This will give you patience and peace of mind. It also beats the hell out of fear, desperation and delusion. In time, one way or another, the publication thing will take care of itself.If you enjoyed this article follow Underground Book Reviews on Facebook or Twitter and subscribe to our newsletter. You can also follow Brian Braden on his blog, Facebook and Twitter and buy his book, Carson's Love. If you are an agent or publisher you can make the smartest financial decision of your life (and alleviate Brian's fear and desperation) by offering him a contract on his brilliant novel Black Sea Gods.
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After a year of reviewing off-beat, independent and self-published books, the writers at Underground Book Reviews share their feelings about the review process. Kimberly
Anyone can be a book reviewer, everyone knows that. Anyone can put their opinion on Amazon and GoodReads.
There’s a difference, however, when you review with purpose. The purpose of the Underground is to help emerging authors, to bridge a gap between traditional and non-traditional publishing.
The most difficult part when I review a book is to separate myself from being an author and reviewing a peer. One of the most difficult reviews I’ve done is when the subject matter went against my core values. Yet, I had to come out of who I am and honestly review how the book was written, the concept, character development and how the plot advanced. I gave it a five star rating. To put my values aside is what I feel a good reviewer has to do if their opinion is to be valued.
As one of the authors of a book I reviewed told me, anything less than a five star review is a slap in the face. Why? Because there are tons of books rated with five-star reviews all over the net. But who reviewed those books? A friend of the author? A relative perhaps?
My quest has changed. I no longer pat the book on the cover and say to myself, I can help this author. I am on the other side of the court that I hope will enable the reader to find the way through a maze of books to one that they will enjoy. And instead of the author thanking me, perhaps the reader will thank-me for an honest, insightful review. Katie:
Reviewing for me used to be easy. Now everything has changed.
As of the first of August I have joined the throng of self-published writers clamoring for reviews. Every book on promotion tells authors like me to seek out reviews. It's how you build an audience, how you draw people on Amazon, how you do anything but flounder and die. I know that to be true. When I see a book on Amazon with fifty reviews and one with two I buy the one with fifty. Common sense, right?
What the how-to books don't tell you is every reviewer in the world is flooded with requests just like mine everyday. As a reviewer I see it. I get two requests a day. That's 730 books a year and I get to pick twelve. Twelve! All those other people who have dreams just like mine get told no. It's depressing.
I hope that any reader that has been told no by one of us knows if we could we would read and support every single one of your books. We'd interview you and let you tell your story to the world. Even if you hear no, please know that in our heart's we are with you, the under-promoted writer. Keep on writing and just keep swimming. AB:
I love meeting other writers. The sad fact is, though, writing is a solitary affair and I come across few writers in my day-to-day life. Over the past year, Underground Book Reviews has introduced me to an overwhelming number of writers and it has been exhilarating, exhausting and edifying all a once. While I love reading new books, my favorite part of reviewing is meeting the minds behind the magic. Every new publishing story is a fairytale, every piece of advice a nugget of wisdom. I want to cheer on every author I meet, encourage
them and tell them how great they are.
Sadly, I can't do this every time. Although I warn every author in advance that I can't promise a positive review, it doesn't make it any easier when I write a negative one. What amazes me is that every author has been thankful for my honesty, whether I recommended their book or not. I can't help but be inspired by the attitude of these new writers.
One day soon, I'll be seeking out reviewers like myself and asking for their brutal honesty. While I look forward to hearing unfiltered opinions from other book reviewers, I'm also bracing myself for the inevitable bad review. I can only hope that I will be able to receive criticism as graciously as the authors I have met through Underground Book Reviews. Brian:
The most difficult thing about being a reviewer is passing on a lot of great books. There are so many talented self-published authors with great novels that receive almost zero attention in the vast Amazonasphere. Are there a lot of bad books out there? Sure, but I focus on the ones with promise. I just wish I had time to review more. I’d like to take this opportunity to clarify what gets my attention as a reviewer for both reader submissions and those I choose from Amazon.
What makes me pass up a reader query? No synopsis, poor pitch, poor grammar in the pitch, no links to where to find the book, groveling and sucking up (I’m just a struggling writer like you and this is embarrassing), or anything else that appears amateur or poorly done.
What makes me pass up a book once I see on Amazon? No cover or really amateur looking cover (sorry, but I do judge a book by its cover), any formatting errors or anomalies that draw my attention, poorly written synopsis or no synopsis at all, being unable to “look inside” and a first page that is flat and passive. You have to grab me on page one or I move on. Here’s something that doesn’t influence me – the number of ratings on Amazon.
I want to read your book. I want to review your book. I’m on your side, so please make it easy on me. Thanks for visiting UBR.If you enjoyed this review, you can subscribe to the Underground or follow us on Facebook and Twitter.
For the last two years I’ve been engaging with my peers in full scale book demolition and rehab. My manuscript, scrawny, tattered and structurally unsound, gets whisked away by my lovely renovation partners, Brian, AB and Kimberly. They restructure it, gloss it up and set it right. When I get it back, I gasp with joy and wonder at how they were able to fix the flaws, shore up the cracks and turn my project into something worth reading. It is, at times, a small miracle.
Not everyone is so lucky.
Many emerging authors struggle through their drafts alone, isolated at the keyboard. When they have a great idea, they have no one to share it with. When they’re stuck, there’s no one to lend a hand. It’s a rough way to work and often unproductive. It is with this in mind that Kimberly, our friend Brandi and I have started The Book Docs. The Book Docs specialize in editorial services for emerging authors. We want to help those writers floundering alone in sea of uncertainty. We’ve been there. We know it’s no fun. We can get you smooth sailing in no time.
So, check us out at www.thebookdocs.com.
The first person to contact each of us and mention Underground Book Reviews gets a free first chapter review.
A Wog Named George...
Blog... I hate that word. It’s an ugly word. It sounds like an unwanted biological function. “In the event of vomiting, diarrhea or sudden blogging, immediately discontinue use of this product and consult your doctor.”
Blog is a shortened version of “web log”. B-log. I get it, but I still don’t like it. I prefer the term wog. Wog has a warm, fuzzy element totally lacking in blog. “Hey, everyone, I’m wogging!” (Sounds like jogging, but without the knee pain.) Wog brings to mind something fuzzy and warm, like a puppy. “Look at the adorable little wog! I will love him and hug him and squeeze him and name him George!”
Alas, since I’m certain the universe will not drop the word blog in favor of wog, I suppose we’re stuck with it. In that event, I guess this is a good a time to tell our Underground readers I’m adopting a wog... I mean starting a blog.
I’m no stranger to blogging. I had a few over the past few years, but, they’re dead now. One died of neglect, one was devoured by trolls, and one I had to put down because, well, it got a little
out of hand. I buried them in the backyard next to the cat.
This time it’s going to be different, I promise. I’m going to make sure this blog has all its shots, a collar in case it gets lost, and will be fed and watered every week. I will love it, and hug it and squeeze it and name it George.
Naw.... actually, it’s just going to be called my blog. I might rename it if something catchy pops into my head at 2 in the morning. If you want to read the debut post click here
and take a look. If you like what you see, keep checking back every Wednesday for a new installment.
I know what my editor, AB, is thinking: “This blog is your
responsibility, Brian. You have to take care of it, take it for walks, and clean up after it.” Yes, AB, I promise I’ll take care of it.
Anyway, there isn’t any room left in my backyard to bury another wog.
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You’ve finished your first novel. Good for you. Now, pull your hand away from the send button on your first query, because you’re not ready. You aren’t even close. Let me save you months, or even years, of painful heartache and frustration. I want to introduce you to a place that will prepare you and your manuscript for the realities of the publishing industry.
A few months ago we at Underground Book Reviews were invited to participate in a new concept called Author Salon. Author Salon is a website with four goals:
1) Be the preferred source of discovery for literary agents, producers, and publishers 2) Serve as an online writers conference
3) Provide a work space for the writing community
4) Become a source for myth-free news and facts on the publishing industry.
Let me put it another way: If writing were like baseball, Author Salon takes you from the farm clubs to your first tryout with the Yankees. It doesn’t guarantee you a spot on the team, but it will show you how to hit, field, spit and wear the uniform like a big leaguer. This is how it works.
Joining Author Salon is intentionally detailed and time-consuming. This process forces you to delve deep into your manuscript and ask yourself serious question about your project. The profile is broken into four major sections: Project Notes and Query, Writer Bio and Goals, Plot and Story Matters, and Prose and Narrative Elements. A step-by-step guide, employing a disciplined methodology, leads authors through the rigorous process of building their profile. Ultimately, a well-honed profile is a standing query that clearly describes your book in a way that gets the right attention.
If Author Salon does anything, it teaches you how to pitch your novel and craft a solid query. The profile is about selling your book and selling yourself. Once you complete your draft profile the real work begins; now it’s time to tear it all down and start over in Author Connect.
After your initial profile is complete you’ll enter the world of Author Connect, Author Salon’s companion online workspace. Here you’ll collaborate with other writers in your genre to improve your profile and, by extension, your manuscript. This process begins with a “call for peers” where you invite other writers to critique your profile using a rigid methodology. You will also critique their work. These are NOT critiques of the novels, but of the profiles. How well do you understand and describe your novel? If done correctly, a feedback loop will emerge between your profile and your manuscript.
This improvement loop helps elevate your profile and manuscript to clearly defined standards. These standards are available to Author Salon members via guides, tutorials and templates. These critiques are painstaking, detailed, and often brutal in their honesty. Not only are your peers reviewing your profile, but so is Author Salon staff. Critiques are always professional and never personal. This is where the real learning occurs. You’ll probably discover you may have to rewrite your profile...and maybe even your whole novel.
As your profile and manuscript improves, you’ll eventually move up the Author Salon four-tiered system. These tiers indicate the quality of your profile and its readiness for both agents and publishers. You’ll enter Author Salon at “In Production I” and eventually progress up the ladder to “Marquee.” By Marquee-level, your profile has been through at least four rounds of peer critiques, peer votes, and an Author Salon advisor review. This process is neither quick nor easy. Patience is a must.
Here’s the pay-off and what makes Author Salon truly different. Agents and editors roam the virtual halls of Author Salon. While they likely concentrate on the projects at Marquee-level, they can tap anyone at any level at any time. It’s not a given, but you may just get your big break here. Even if you don’t, upon reaching Marquee-level, you can feel confident in your ability to pitch your manuscript.
Now that I told you what Author Salon is, I can tell you what it is not. It’s not a writing circle or review site for people who are tinkering with the idea of becoming writers. This is for serious work-to-publish authors. It’s for professionals; those who don’t follow the rules are shown the door. It is also not for the faint-of-heart or thin-skinned. Your peers and the site facilitators will be blunt. If you do not heed their advice, you don’t move up the tiers.
For those considering self-publication, I think Author Salon is a must. In Author Salon, you’ll learn how to write a hook line, a synopsis, define your conflict, and put your best samples on display. Author Salon is an excellent tool for any writer, regardless of desired publishing source.
Author Salon is still in early beta-testing with a small, but growing stable of writers. Like any emergent website, it’s still evolving. However, while it’s in beta-testing joining is free. After this widow closes it will cost $9.99 a month, or $79.00 a year, to join.
Only time will time will tell if Author Salon lives up to its potential, but so far it looks promising. We at the Underground will keep you posted as our journey continues. You can find Author Salon here.If you enjoyed this post, you can follow Brian on Facebook or Twitter. You can also subscribe to the Underground.
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