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Review by: Brian Braden
Title: Itsy Bitsy Spider
Author: Kimberly Shursen
Publisher: Self-Published
Genre(s): Action-Thriller
Length: 313 pages


 The Rundown

In order for an action-thriller to work, it must always be in motion. I can never feel comfortable, in control, or safe. I have to care about the hero. The bad guy has to be bad. There needs to be a love interest and she has to be pretty and nice and occasionally vulnerable. I mean, really, if she isn’t vulnerable why the heck do we need a hero? If one’s adrenaline doesn’t spike at least once per chapter, the book doesn’t earn a five star review. If I don’t get an urge to put on 3-D glasses and eat some popcorn while I’m reading it, it doesn’t get a five star review. Bottom line, if its not fun, why bother? These were my criteria for evaluating Itsy  Bitsy Spider by debut author Kimberly Shursen. 
 
Matt Christenson is a young, handsome investigative reporter for the Boston Globe. He’s assigned to track down a missing lawyer with connections to Mayor Jack McCallin. Instead, Matt stumbles upon Claire, the mayor’s beautiful daughter, and her little girl, Lizzie. With the help of a few trusted friends Matt discovers Claire and Lizzie are caught in a tangled web of lies originating from the mayor himself. This bloody web stretches from one end of Boston to the other, and now it’s trapped Matt. Claire holds a secret so devastating the mayor will do anything to silence her. The mayor commands Boston’s cops, underworld, and media. There is nowhere to hide as the web tightens around Matt, Claire and Lizzie. Matt becomes part of the story and finds himself falling for Claire, even though it might cost him his life. 

Itsy is always in motion. I can think of only two chapters where it even thinks about slowing down. The action takes place across the City of Boston, where Matt and  his team find themselves imperiled by the mayor’s powerful allies. I always felt a little on edge, because I knew the characters were never safe. Like them, I  never knew who to trust and expected betrayal at every turn.  I cringed a few times worrying about Lizzie, Claire’s little girl. The easy-going hero, Matt Christenson, is also very likable. I can see a series of books with him as the hero and can easily see Itsy Bitsy Spider being turned into a screen play. 

Never pretentious and always entertaining, Itsy Bitsy Spider is a state-of-the-art action thriller. Enjoyably easy to read,  I had a strong urge for popcorn the whole time I read it. Now, where are my 3-D glasses? 

Five out of Five Stars. 

Kimberly Shursen Links:
Itsy Bitsy Spider on Amazon
Kimberly Shursen’s Website

Kimberly Shursen on FacebookTwitterGoogle, and LinkedIn.

Editor’s  Note: A UBR alumni and founding member, Kimberly Shursen departed
our staff a year ago to pursue new opportunities. We told her when she published
her first novel, we would be honored to review it, but she wouldn’t receive any
special favors or consideration. This reviewer bought this book and did not
receive a free copy. 


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TITLE: Agents of Change

AUTHOR: Guy Harrison

PUBLISHER: Self-published through Amazon and Smashwords

GENRE: Action

PAGES: 380


THE RUNDOWN

The reason I decided to read Agents of Change was because the first chapter was humorous, action-packed and suspenseful. I figured, if anything, at least it would keep me entertained. In that respect, the book delivered. Guy Harrison’s writing was non-stop action, and kept me turning pages from beginning to end. Other than that, though, the book fell flat.

The premise of Agents of Change revolves around a secret institute which uses magical shape shifting and telekinetic powers to “do good.” While this could be an interesting scenario, I found that it was no more than a plot device. The back story behind the shape shifting ability seemed disconnected from the story; a magical arrowhead carved by a Shaman seemed like an easy out. The Agents of Change would simply “swoosh” into their new form, changing in seconds into a new person, and even wearing new clothes. And the Agency’s goodwill mission seemed trite compared to the possible power of shape shifting and telekinesis.

Determined to make the best of the pages before me, I suspended my disbelief and tried to go with the flow. The themes throughout the book were fantastic: the ability of good people to turn bad and the corruption of power are classic topics. However, it seemed as if the book itself was a thinly-veiled attempt to directly address these topics, as opposed to a vivid story that left me pondering them.

At  the very least, I hoped that the love story would keep me entertained. In that regard, Agents of Change did redeem itself. The love triangle that the main character finds himself in was far from hot and steamy, but it progressed in a surprising direction. Still, while all of the characters in the novel were unique, none of them were given enough depth for me to truly connect with them.

As the book went on, Guy lost the humorous tone that originally sold me on his writing and instead relied solely on action. While this kept me turning pages, it didn’t help me enjoy the book as a whole. Guy left behind his voice and style as he rushed to get his story on the page. If Guy had spent more time on his back story, flushing out his characters and analyzing his dialogue, he might have come out with a gem.


THE RECOMMENDATION

Guy Harrison is a good writer, but he made the number-one self-publishing mistake. He published his novel too soon. The book needs deeper characters, better back story, and the theme should be nestled within the plot, not driving it with a riding crop. I can’t, in good conscience, recommend Agents of Change as your next beach read, but I have no doubt that Guy has enough imagination and talent to carry him further. I am excited to see how his writing career progresses and what new scenarios he creates in the future.
 

LINKS

Agents of Change on Amazon
Guy Harrison on Facebook
Guy Harrison's websiteFollow Guy on Twitter 


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The Tesla Formula is the second book in the Patrick Carlton adventure series. In this installment, Department of Justice prosecutor Carlton stumbles on a seventy-year old murder mystery while on vacation in Hollywood. In quick order, he becomes enmeshed with Islamic terrorists, global intelligence agencies, law enforcement, and, perhaps most dangerous of all, lawyers. He discovers radical Islamasists and European bureaucrats are conspiring to bring America to its knees by destroying its economy and cornering the world oil market. Only one thing stands in their way: a secret formula to produce limitless electricity, invented over half a century ago by famous inventor Nikola Tesla.

Not far into The Tesla Formula I found myself humming the Warren Zevon tune Lawyers, Guns and Money. Tesla’s unique blend of lawyers, guns and money are what supercharge this novel and set it apart from other action thrillers.

First, let’s talk about the guns. Bullets fly from beginning to end, but action is the least-powerful element of this otherwise strong book. Kublicki is faithful to the action genre, almost too faithful. While the action keeps readers on their toes, in several places it feels slightly overdone. The good news is this book has a lot more going for it besides action.

Tesla’s hero, Patrick Carlton, is a former Navy combat veteran, wears cowboy boots and is deadly with a Glock, but is a lawyer at his core. However, his underlying respect for the law makes him a different kind of action hero and gives this novel a depth lacking in most thrillers. Carlton is repeatedly frustrated by the barriers the law throws at him, but he always finds a way to get the job done legally. For example, in one of the book’s best scenes Carleton convinces a reluctant federal judge to issue a search warrant using an ingenious twist on eminent domain. Carlton is the thinking man’s action hero.

But Carleton isn’t the only lawyer making Tesla hum along. The most terrifying weapon in this thriller is a contract wielded by a very nasty law firm employed by the terrorists. While this book starts with a race to find Tesla’s formula, the climax is Carlton’s race to keep this contract, the legal equivalent to an atomic bomb, from being signed. Tesla is like Law and Order meets Sum of all Fears.

Where there are lawyers, there is money. While Carlton combats the bad guys with military and law enforcement, his allies do battle behind the scenes with computers, phones and dollars. Kublicki vaults the reader on a journey through international banking and finance behind the world’s turbulent energy markets.

With his masterful blend of lawyers, guns and money Kublicki reminds us the War on Terror is fought not only on the battlefield, but by dedicated law enforcement, legal and financial experts working with little fanfare. This thoughtful balance gives The Tesla Formula its element of realism. I also like that Tesla paints these professionals as they should be – as heroes. Nicolas Kublicki convincingly weaves law and economics into the modern action thriller and makes it work. For that, The Tesla Formula earns an electrifying 90 out of 99 cents.  

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